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I have scars
from wounds
I've never had

And seek
to fill holes
that don't exist

They say that
I am whole
but my other half
still cries  

How come I miss what
I've never had
:iconstarell:
For :iconpassionforpoetry: 's contest
it is based on this picture [link] by :iconme2smart4u:

(long thought process, feel free to skip)

I have trouble doing poetry based off other things so it took me awhile to come up with this. My first thought on the picture was that it was about lovers.

To me there was something about the lovers that seemed unreal or fantastical. It was almost like they were angels. These thoughts together made me think of a story i had heard about humans having only one wing and they had to find the person whose wing matched so they could fly together (aw sappy romantic sigh)

The picture offers just a glimpse of what I think could have been, will be, or of what should be. A desire. Maybe a desire for what is not known.

And then arises the question of how can what was never lost be found again.
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:iconimaginative-lioness:
*imaginative-lioness May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yet another amazing piece, :heart:! I absolutely adore the opening, you have a wonderful talent!
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:iconstarell:
Aw, thank you so very much! :blushes: Openings are very important I feel :)
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:icon478921092j8927w38yy:
This is amazing, I hope you can keep writing. I hate to ask this, and I know you have more important things to do, but could you please write something along the lines of a fantasy story?
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:iconstarell:
aw, :blush: thank you! Well I am definitely going to keep writing!
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:icondarkheartartistry:
~Darkheartartistry Sep 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
There's a poem in my journal that i haven't typed up when i do you're getting a link i think you'll like it with this one.
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:iconstarell:
I look forward to it!
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:iconsumgie1:
This goes so nicely with the picture. :)
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:iconstarell:
yay! that was something I was aiming for!
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:iconme2smart4u:
*Me2Smart4U Sep 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thank you so very much for entering my contest :boogie:
the flow of the poem is truly unique :nod:
I do love the flow which is painted in awesome details
very well written

GOOD LUCK
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:iconstarell:
It was my pleasure to enter the contest!
Thank you for checking out the poem and your lovely words on the matter!
:hug:
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