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There are tiny holes
In the sleeves of all my shirts
And my sweaters
And my dresses
From where I used to proudly pin
My heart for all to see
Until that day it got torn off
Smashed and mangled on the ground
It's doing better now
I keep it tucked safely away
Although I still shiver a bit
Whenever the wind blows
Through those tiny holes
Growing up is a conspiracy!
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PoetryToTheMasses Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
This poem was featured in our weekly feature, after it was suggested by ~crystelclear1104.

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starell Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Thank you so very much! :hug: 
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PoetryToTheMasses Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
No problem :)
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crystelclear1104 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Amazingly creative, not to mention your excellent sense for rhythm and meter. :heart:
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starell Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012
Thank you very much! You are too kind :hug:
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crystelclear1104 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure!
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SimpleSilkSky Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh my...amazing imagination...perfect flow...I love this so much...I love it so much i'm jealous I didn't write it. I'm honored to have it in the group. :heart: :heart: :heart:
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starell Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
:hug: thank you so much that is like the best comment ever!!! <3
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SimpleSilkSky Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
and the truest one ever! C: C: C: :heart:
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starell Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
Awe :D you are like the sweetest person ever
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