literature

Inspire Yourself

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I know you've got
a million
and one
ideas
rushing through
your mind
now,
but
I know that you'll
use them up,
or
forget.

Until

you are searching
everywhere
but
within.
More into spacing and punctuation! Please tell me what you think!
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sumgie1's avatar
I think it's cool to have some punctuation for variety. :D I guess it's usage and omission can serve as an artistic means both in the area of meaning and aesthetic. Though, I don't really understand what you were trying to say with the poem.